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1) Type up any comments you can find in your papers - these may be on individual questions or at the end of the paper. Alternatively, write something you've learned from going through the two papers in class.  2) Which paper did you do better in? paper  1 because I answered all of the questions  3) Why do you think you did better in that paper? i have used some good words in there paper  4) Focusing on Paper 1, write down  three  things you need to improve on before the real exams. This may be a particular section or type of question (e.g. unseen analysis, 20 mark essay) or a particular type of media or CSP (e.g. advertising or NHS Represent)  I have to improve quotes and highlight them to use it  5 ) Now look at Paper 2. W rite down  three  things you need to improve on for Paper 2 before the real exams. Again, this might be a topic, type of question or specific skill.   I have to use key words and use them in my sentence  

  1) Type up any feedback on your paper  (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential). If you only have marks and a grade on the paper, write a WWW/EBI yourself based on your scores. WWW: Well done for attempting each question  EBI:  2) Use  the mark scheme for this Paper 2 mock to read the answers AQA were looking for . First, write down a definition and example of non-diegetic sound (Q1.1 and 1.2).  3) Next, identify  three  points you could have made in Q1.3 - camerawork and the extract. Look for the indicative content in the mark scheme - these are the suggested answers from AQA. 4) Now look at Q1.4 in the mark scheme - pick out  two  points from the mark scheme that you could have included in your answer. 5) Focus on Q2 - the 20-mark essay on representations of age and social and cultural contexts. Pick out  three  points from the mark scheme that you didn't include in your answer. 6) Turning your attention to Section B, write a defini